Nardvark's English Language exams are coming up, which include the daunting task of writing a composition.
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Nardvark's first obstacle is understanding the difference between what they mean by "descriptive" and "narrative" writing.
Always a pal, the Nerdvark explains:
Descriptive: They don't want you to tell a story, just describe something using lots of imagery, and appealing to all five senses.
Narrative: They want you to tell a story. A story needs certain elements:
Not including the title, Nardvark wrote 447 words; perfect for IGCSEs but you'd need to add a few hundred more words for AS. You will notice that there are no errors in this story. That is because Nardvark made sure he had time in his hour to revise and edit his work.
For more on the five steps of the writing process, which you should always follow, click here.
Finally, Nardvark's composition is ready to hand in. It will be sealed in an envelope and sent overseas for marking. Click here to find out more about how this paper will be marked.
Are you looking for help with your IGCSE or AS English? I can help you. Click here for more info.
Nardvark's first obstacle is understanding the difference between what they mean by "descriptive" and "narrative" writing.
Always a pal, the Nerdvark explains:
Descriptive: They don't want you to tell a story, just describe something using lots of imagery, and appealing to all five senses.
- If it helps, imagine you're sitting or standing in one place, and describe everything that you see/hear/smell/feel/taste.
- You can pretend it is part of a longer story or a novel, guide book, etc if you think it is bizarre to just be describing something for no reason.
- More on DESCRIPTIVE WRITING coming up in a future blog post. For now, if you like, look here for tips on using imagery.
Narrative: They want you to tell a story. A story needs certain elements:
- Plot - think of it as conflict, which is usually labeled "Man vs. [something]" ... "Man vs. Man", for example, The Dark Knight is Batman vs. The Joker. "Man vs. Nature", for example Twister is Bill and Jo Harding vs. a big tornado. "Man vs. Self", for example The Lion King is Simba vs himself as he struggles to come to terms with his place as the king of pride rock. "Man vs. Society", for example Mockingjay, Katniss Everdeen vs. the dystopian society she lives in. "Man vs. Machine", for example I, Robot, short stories with various protagonists vs. various robots. Learn more about conflict at Wikipedia. Alternately, you could think of the plot as a problem and a solution.
- Characters - A short story usually has only one or two. Develop them with visual detail and thought or action to show personality.
- Setting - A short story takes place somewhere. Develop the setting using imagery.
- Dialogue - Bring your story to life with some characters talking to each other, or by having your main character thinking to him/herself (internal monologue.)
- Show, don't tell. Reading a story should be like experiencing a moment. Here's a tip - imagine that you have a magical camera on your shoulder, as you live through the events of the story. The magical camera can pick up everything, not just video and audio, but even smells, tastes, tactile images and feelings, too. Write down everything that the magical camera records. Oh, but delete the boring bits.
Let's have a look at an example.
On Nardvark's composition test, he chose the narrative. First he read the question carefully so he would not screw up, and then did a quick plan:
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Nardvark's prewriting and plan. |
Now, here's Nardvark's story.
4(a)
Giant Anteaters from Mars
It was a typical
Saturday. I rolled out of bed at the
crack of noon and got to gaming. My
tummy started rumbling so hard that I thought the tremors would shake my laptop
right off it. I realised I’d have to go
to Megamart and get some doughnuts and Hi-C.
As I passed, children
dropped their tricycles and ran into their houses crying. “Mommy, it has a long nose and a pointy
horn! What is it?”
I arrived at the shop
and held the door open for a woman with handfuls of carrier bags. She took several steps back, a horrified look
on her face.
“Ma’am,” I said.
She gulped.
Shrugging, I entered
the Megamart, heading straight to the bakery aisle. The other shoppers scattered, leaving a mess
of aromatic baked goods in their wake. I
selected a dozen assorted doughnuts.
That would keep me going for the day.
Next I would need
some beverages. As I reached the fizzy-drinks
cooler, I heard a scream of terror. I
didn’t think much of it, since there was usually a lot of screaming going on
around me. A short, fat guy with a
pointed horn usually has that effect on people.
I started filling my basket with bubbly drinks in various fruity
flavours.
When I turned toward
the checkout counters, contemplating whether to use the self-checkouts or try
my luck with an actual person, I was horrified by what I saw.
Something was eating
the customers.
Shoppers were running
about like marbles in a bucket, with panicked faces. One skater boy, his baggy sweatshirt torn
down the middle, ran right past me shouting, “Yo, dude, a giant anteater thing with
a long tongue! It’s eating everyone, OMG!”
Not wanting to be
eaten, I dropped my basket and ran for the door. Just outside, however, hovered a bus-sized
beat-up craft covered in red dust – Mars!
Just then I saw it: a
fat, green bald thing with no ears, eyes, or nose; just two tall antennae and a
long tube protruding from its head. With
its slick yellow tongue, it was grabbing the screaming shoppers like they were
ants.
There are many things
about the Nardvark that nobody knows.
One is that I, too, have a long tongue.
I realised that only I could stop
the Giant Anteater from Mars from eating any more of my neighbours.
The next time his
tongue came out, I stuck mine out. Our
tongues got hopelessly tangled, and he turned towards me wailing. I rammed my horn right between his feelers.
The people of
Megamart cheered, “Oh, Nardvark, you’re my hero!”
For more on the five steps of the writing process, which you should always follow, click here.
Finally, Nardvark's composition is ready to hand in. It will be sealed in an envelope and sent overseas for marking. Click here to find out more about how this paper will be marked.
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